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That's NOT poetry. I don't know who told you any of this was poetry but it ain't poetry.I’m sousing.... yet again View attachment 73922
That's NOT poetry. I don't know who told you any of this was poetry but it ain't poetry.I’m sousing.... yet again View attachment 73922
This is my style ....That's NOT poetry. I don't know who told you any of this was poetry but it ain't poetry.
i think it's sounds like what it is: something written in 2 mins by an old souse. that's not poetry.This is my style ....
I’m quite happy with it ...
I don’t read poetry
And don’t like poetry
As I mentioned this morning
You need a break
From it all ....
In all honestly what do you
Think of mine
Completely correct....i think it's sounds like what it is: something written in 2 mins by an old souse. that's not poetry.
Come on ....given up what, you old drunk?
Personally I 4king don’t likeCome on ....
I want to help you here
Your going through a bad patch
I told you this morning
Take a break
oh ted hughes! that reminds me! this is another favourite!!Personally I 4king don’t like
Poetry.....
As I’ve said I’ve got my own style
I don’t read any poetry whatsoever...
Sylvia plath
Was married to Ted Hughes
This I know
Then she shoved her head
Into a gas cooker
This I know
I mentioned this morning about your writhing style....
I think you’ve got yourself a bit stuck .....
Take Time out
Your style of writing may not suit you .....
Have you thought of that ??
Personally I 4king don’t like
Poetry.....
As I’ve said I’ve got my own style
I don’t read any poetry whatsoever...
Sylvia plath
Was married to Ted Hughes
This I know
Then she shoved her head
Into a gas cooker
This I know
I mentioned this morning about your writhing style....
I think you’ve got yourself a bit stuck .....
Take Time out
Your style of writing may not suit you .....
Have you thought of that ??
DONT....oh ted hughes! that reminds me! this is another favourite!!
A quote from Birthday Letters
The Tender Place Your temples , where the hair crowded in , Were the tender place. Once to check I dropped a file across the electrodes of a twelve-...www.goodreads.com
you're right, my writing style does NOT suit me. it is too flippant, too sarcastic, too shrug-of-the-shoulders. i want to take myself seriously not just as a writer but IN my writing, the way rachel cusk takes herself seriously, and i dont know how to do that.
oh yeah, you've really reached the apogee of self realization in your poetry, budDONT....
You need you own style....
STOP now
Think about you
And your own way of
Thinking about things.....
You need a Rifkie style
Nobody else’s
Even
Look at mine
It’s mostly shite..... but it’s mine
Take a break and a think
It could be weeks
Or months
DONT EVER GIVE UP
Yes I have ....oh yeah, you've really reached the apogee of self realization in your poetry, bud
well I AM looking to be published! how the f*** else am i supposed to meet neil and live in london! there's NO OTHER WAY!!!!!!!!! im not looking for some hobby as i get old and drink myself to death!!Yes I have ....
I know I’m shite....
A drunken ex whore....
I’m happy though
I’m not wanting to be published
I’m me ...
Come on girl
Think...
take time ....
It will come
Why so negative.......well I AM looking to be published! how the f*** else am i supposed to meet neil and live in london! there's NO OTHER WAY!!!!!!!!! im not looking for some hobby as i get old and drink myself to death!!
ANYway, because your pep talks are massively underwhelming im going to go watch triggernometry.
the reason you're not stressed is because you know your poetry cant be any better than it is. so to be told not to be stressed by you is not advice i need.Why so negative.......
Come on
Let’s look at a few things here
Your stressed
So stop....
Take time ....
And think.....
Take a break
Then think ......
Have a week off
Am I stressed with my
Absolute shite . No