nicky wire's legs
Christ is king!
That's NOT poetry. I don't know who told you any of this was poetry but it ain't poetry.
Such bloody awful poetry
- Thread starter Carlisle baz
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Carlisle baz
Cock of the north
Women
Carlisle baz
Cock of the north
This is my style ....
I’m quite happy with it ...
I don’t read poetry
And don’t like poetry
As I mentioned this morning
You need a break
From it all ....
In all honestly what do you
Think of mine
nicky wire's legs
Christ is king!
i think it's sounds like what it is: something written in 2 mins by an old souse. that's not poetry.This is my style ....
I’m quite happy with it ...
I don’t read poetry
And don’t like poetry
As I mentioned this morning
You need a break
From it all ....
In all honestly what do you
Think of mine
nicky wire's legs
Christ is king!
these are my favourite poems. acquaint yourself with them
Prometheus - Goethe
The Song of Wandering Aengus -- WB Yeats
The Geranium - Theodore Roethke
Pediatric Suicide - Franz Wright
Elm - Sylvia Plath
Dreamsong 29 - John Berryman
Ode to a Nightingale - John Keats
Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard - Thomas Gray
The Lady of Shalott - Alfred, Lord Tennyson
Fever 103 - Sylvia Plath
Dont Hesitate to Ask - Michel Faber
Obsession - Baudelaire
Mary's Song - Sylvia Plath
My Last Duchess - Robert Browning
The Boys I Mean Are Not Refined -- ee Cummings
After Great Pain a Formal Feeling Comes - Emily Dickinson
Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood - William Wordsworth
Scirocco - Jorie Graham
Prometheus - Goethe
The Song of Wandering Aengus -- WB Yeats
The Geranium - Theodore Roethke
Pediatric Suicide - Franz Wright
Elm - Sylvia Plath
Dreamsong 29 - John Berryman
Ode to a Nightingale - John Keats
Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard - Thomas Gray
The Lady of Shalott - Alfred, Lord Tennyson
Fever 103 - Sylvia Plath
Dont Hesitate to Ask - Michel Faber
Obsession - Baudelaire
Mary's Song - Sylvia Plath
My Last Duchess - Robert Browning
The Boys I Mean Are Not Refined -- ee Cummings
After Great Pain a Formal Feeling Comes - Emily Dickinson
Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood - William Wordsworth
Scirocco - Jorie Graham
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Carlisle baz
Cock of the north
Carlisle baz
Cock of the north
Have you given up lass ????
nicky wire's legs
Christ is king!
given up what, you old drunk?
Carlisle baz
Cock of the north
Come on ....
I want to help you here
Your going through a bad patch
I told you this morning
Take a break
nicky wire's legs
Christ is king!
oh my god, it just occurred to me that one day neil is going to die!!!!!
nicky wire's legs
Christ is king!
it was the memory of these lines that made me think of that:
What though the radiance which was once so bright
Be now for ever taken from my sight,
Though nothing can bring back the hour
Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;
What though the radiance which was once so bright
Be now for ever taken from my sight,
Though nothing can bring back the hour
Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;
Carlisle baz
Cock of the north
Personally I 4king don’t like
Poetry.....
As I’ve said I’ve got my own style
I don’t read any poetry whatsoever...
Sylvia plath
Was married to Ted Hughes
This I know
Then she shoved her head
Into a gas cooker
This I know
I mentioned this morning about your writhing style....
I think you’ve got yourself a bit stuck .....
Take Time out
Your style of writing may not suit you .....
Have you thought of that ??
nicky wire's legs
Christ is king!
oh ted hughes! that reminds me! this is another favourite!!
A quote from Birthday Letters
The Tender Place Your temples , where the hair crowded in , Were the tender place. Once to check I dropped a file across the electrodes of a twelve-...
www.goodreads.com
you're right, my writing style does NOT suit me. it is too flippant, too sarcastic, too shrug-of-the-shoulders. i want to take myself seriously not just as a writer but IN my writing, the way rachel cusk takes herself seriously, and i dont know how to do that.
Carlisle baz
Cock of the north
DONT....oh ted hughes! that reminds me! this is another favourite!!
A quote from Birthday Letters
The Tender Place Your temples , where the hair crowded in , Were the tender place. Once to check I dropped a file across the electrodes of a twelve-...www.goodreads.com
you're right, my writing style does NOT suit me. it is too flippant, too sarcastic, too shrug-of-the-shoulders. i want to take myself seriously not just as a writer but IN my writing, the way rachel cusk takes herself seriously, and i dont know how to do that.
You need you own style....
STOP now
Think about you
And your own way of
Thinking about things.....
You need a Rifkie style
Nobody else’s
Even
Look at mine
It’s mostly shite..... but it’s mine
Take a break and a think
It could be weeks
Or months
DONT EVER GIVE UP
nicky wire's legs
Christ is king!
oh yeah, you've really reached the apogee of self realization in your poetry, bud
Carlisle baz
Cock of the north
Yes I have ....
I know I’m shite....
A drunken ex whore....
I’m happy though
I’m not wanting to be published
I’m me ...
Come on girl
Think...
take time ....
It will come
nicky wire's legs
Christ is king!
well I AM looking to be published! how the f*** else am i supposed to meet neil and live in london! there's NO OTHER WAY!!!!!!!!! im not looking for some hobby as i get old and drink myself to death!!Yes I have ....
I know I’m shite....
A drunken ex whore....
I’m happy though
I’m not wanting to be published
I’m me ...
Come on girl
Think...
take time ....
It will come
ANYway, because your pep talks are massively underwhelming im going to go watch triggernometry.
Carlisle baz
Cock of the north
Why so negative.......
Come on
Let’s look at a few things here
Your stressed
So stop....
Take time ....
And think.....
Take a break
Then think ......
Have a week off
Am I stressed with my
Absolute shite . No
Carlisle baz
Cock of the north
Come on girl
You can do this ...
You can do this ...
nicky wire's legs
Christ is king!
the reason you're not stressed is because you know your poetry cant be any better than it is. so to be told not to be stressed by you is not advice i need.
