Sorry. This is not good. The phrasing, anticipation and general timing is out. It's a busker's version.
Let me explain the thinking here...
Here's a YOUNGER PERSON, therefore a newcomer, unsullied by previous releases, who likes a song on a RECENT (relatively) album, and says he like MY (not that other chap's) version, which makes me, despite all that other nonsense you may have heard, RELEVANT.
Please give me a record deal. Young people still like me. All that other stuff you may have heard is nonsense.